Cindy’s Story Trivia

This story originated from a random story I told someone on Facebook chat one day to entertain them while they were at work. It was all just spur of the moment and off the top of my head, but I liked how it came out, so I started working on it after I finished book 20 of the Unseen Things series.

This book was only ever intended to be a standalone. I wanted to get a non-series book done and published so I could not only use it to introduce people to my writing, but also so I could possibly farm it out to an agent who might be more reticent to accept a huge series rather than a single novel.

In chapter 3 when Frank comically feigns caffeine withdrawal, it’s a nod to Adam Sandler’s The Waterboy, when Bobby’s mom has the “brain pain”.

In chapter 4 Frank mentions losing his penis in a bizarre gardening accident when he was twelve. This is a little nod to how one of Spinal Tap’s many drummers died. Then when she calls him on it because she’d already seen it during her interview, he says, Well, it got better.” This is a nod to Monty Python and the Holy Grail’s witch burning scene where John Cleese says she turned him into a Newt, but he got better.

In chapter 15 when Cindy says she was just hangin’ out, playin’ Nintendo, that’s a reference to the movie Baseketball.

In chapter 16, Frank says, “Lotta people tell me that.” That’s a reference to a bit at the beginning of one of Andrew Dice Clay’s concert videos.

 

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Cindy’s Story

After walking out on yet another convenience store job, Cindy needed to find herself a new job as quickly as possible, otherwise she was going to end up broke and living on the street.  Her apartment manager informed her that his brother, a private investigator, was looking for an assistant, so he offered to make a call for her to see if he could arrange an interview.  With no other prospects, she jumped at the chance for not only quick employment, but also a new career that would get her out of the convenience store business once and for all.

As it turns out, being a private detective isn’t as glamorous as they make it look on television.  It comes with certain indignities and moral issues that she’d never really considered before she applied for the position.  Not only that, but Frank, her boss, seems to delight in pissing her off.  The only thing he seems to enjoy more than pissing her off is complaining about how horrible her coffee is, yet for some reason that she can’t quite seem to figure out, he goes out of his way to help her succeed in any way that he possibly can.  Then she’s got his sister Kayla to deal with.  She’s like a nightmare on wheels with no empathy and no filter whatsoever, so you never know what’s going to come out of her mouth next.

The one thing Cindy’s got going for her is that she’s got a super high aptitude for the job, so all she needs to do in order to succeed is to learn how to control her temper, work hard, and most importantly…learn how to make a decent cup of coffee.  The first two are relatively simple, but the third…not so much.

 

 

Trailer for the Unseen Things series.

The Unseen Things series is a new adult, contemporary fantasy / sci-fi hybrid series.  While the first book of the series may read a bit young adult because of their age, the series as a whole is actually a new adult series that is not intended for readers under the age of 17.

Another note about the series is that these books are not stand alone stories.  It’s a series in the true sense of the word.  The books must be read in order because of the story and character developments that take place.  Each book leads into the next, so if you read them out of order you’ll likely get quite lost as to what’s going on.

I wrote this as a true series, because there’s a progression of development with the characters that I wanted to follow as they aged, learned new things and gained more experience.  They start out in the first book at eighteen years old, and by the eleventh book they’re around twenty-four years old, so there’s a definite time progression that takes place.

Yes the series contains profanity, non-explicit sex and violence.  That’s why it’s a new adult series.  It’s written for and intended to appeal to adults from college age on, and contains a variety of elements to appeal to adult sensibilities including things like love, romance, friendship, family, dealing with loss, personal growth and whole lot more.  There’s also a considerable amount of humor throughout the series.

On the fantasy and science fiction front, you get dimension travel, various species of intelligent beings, genetics and genetic engineering, advanced technology, the enslavement and abuse of various species, etc….

It’s a series that’s as much about the characters and their relationships with each other as it is about all of the other story elements that are taking place.  I’ve worked really hard to make the characters feel like real people that you can truly identify with and care about.  Hopefully, at least for some of you, they’ll feel like people you know, or people you’d like to know, and it’ll make the time you spend following their lives and adventures all the more pleasurable.

Origins (Book #1)

When Jarrod Grant was fourteen years old, a portal burst open in his room, and from it a terrifying creature emerged. It grabbed his mother Alicia and his five year old brother Joseph and then vanished with them back into the portal from which it came, leaving Jarrod standing there terrified and alone.

Four years later, Jarrod is now a senior in high school, and no one ever believed his story. The therapists all said that he’d deluded himself into believing it because he couldn’t deal with whatever horrific events had caused the disappearance of his family, and at school he was turned into an outcast because of the stories he’d told the authorities.

That all changed when he met Tina and Sarah. They were the first ones who ever believed his story, and the pair made it their mission to help him find the answers he so desperately needed.

They’re joined along the way by a new friend named Derek, who has a tragic past of his own, and a woman named Patricia who knows things that only a very few others in the world could even dream of. Together they’ll discover the truth of what happened to Jarrod’s family on that fateful night, and it’s a secret that will send them down a path that some of them may not return from.

Origins is book 1 in the Unseen Things series. It’s an introduction to the characters, as well as the overall theme of the series itself.

 

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The Hunt (Book #2)

Now that they had the ability to travel the dimensions, they also had the opportunity to rescue Jarrod Grant’s family from the troll-like Faranox and the Agaronin slave  masters, but that wasn’t going to be an easy task.

Not only did they have no experience with fighting the Agaronin, but they had never  traveled outside of their own dimension before, and as such, Derek, Jarrod, Tina and  Sarah find themselves flying blind, and everything becomes a learning experience.   Mistakes are made and lessons are learned as they have to kill as many of the Agaronin  as they can in order to secure more of of the amulets that allow them to travel to the  various dimensions.

When they get confirmation from a rescued slave that Jarrod’s family are in fact alive,  a plan is set into motion to mount a full scale assault on the Faranox village where  they’re being held, not only to rescue them, but to rescue as many of the other slaves  as possible, so they can be returned to their own families and dimensions.

Unseen Things: The Hunt is the second book in the Unseen Things series.  You’ll need to read Unseen Things: Origins before you read this book, otherwise you won’t get a lot of the references to things that happened during the first book.

 

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Exploration (Book #3)

After a successful raid on a Faranox village in which they rescued Jarrod’s family, as well as a large number of slaves from several other dimensions, Jarrod, Derek, Tina, Sarah and Patricia returned home for a well deserved rest.  Unfortunately, in their line of work, rest is never a permanent state of being, and soon enough they find themselves in the blue fin dimension forging a bond of friendship with its inhabitants, who at first glance seemed like a simple, friendly people living in a tribal society, but appearances can be deceiving and soon enough they learn that there’s a lot more to their new friends than meets the eye.

With major story and character developments, Exploration propels the Unseen Things series forward in new, exciting and sometimes tragic directions.  The characters find themselves dealing with a variety of issues including love, family, morality, life and death, as well as old foes that return to cause new problems.  It’s a wild ride filled with love, humor and adventure, and one that you won’t want to miss.

 

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Revenge (Book #4)

Word had spread amongst the tribal leaders in the Faranox dimension of the human raid on one of their towns in which many of the Agaronin were killed and all of their slaves were freed.  Now, five tribal leaders have banded together and are starting work on a massive new settlement in order to better defend against the human threat.

Each tribal leader had brought all of their Agaronin and all of their slaves to help build the massive new village…however, they made one huge mistake.  They attacked the village of the blue fins that the humans had befriended, damaging buildings and taking over half of the village’s population as new slaves, leaving their newest team member, a blue fin named Freddie and his human friends looking for revenge, but they were going to have to be smart about it.

Derek had planned the first attack, and now it was up to him to plan a brand new one on a scale he’d never imagined.  With the help of the entire team, most of their parents, their friends and the rest of the blue fin villagers, they were going to have to take out an enemy threat that had them outnumbered by fifteen to one while rescuing all of the slaves and the blue fin villagers in the process.

Many other life changing events await them as well, including more new team members, a new house, new revelations about the origins and purpose of the blue fin people and a rep that’s suddenly breaking centuries old protocols to make personal contact with them.

 

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Immortals (Book #5)

None of them realized at first who the mysterious woman was who showed up at their door after the party that night.  None of them would have ever believed it could have been their mysterious rep, who up to this point they’d been barred from having any personal contact with.  Yet here she was in the flesh, and she had a gift with her from the backers that would change their lives very literally forever.

As the group’s numbers increase, they all start adjusting to their new life and their new abilities.  The first order of business is to train the new recruits, and then once that’s done, they get back to work investigating the various dimensions, both known and unknown.  Old enemies return, new discoveries are made and in the end there’s a change coming on the horizon that none of them ever saw coming.

 

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Division (Book #6)

When they received their injections of the original serum, they became immortal and their bodies gained the ability to regenerate, but now the backers have created a new version of the serum and with that serum comes a host of new strengths and abilities that they never even dreamed possible.

It’s not just the new serum that’s changing things however.

With marriages, new team members, a division of the group into two separate operations, the return of an old friend and a visit from two very unexpected guests, Division represents another great leap forward in the evolution of the Unseen Things universe.

 

 

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Trackers (Book #7)

When they volunteered to move to Scotland to start up a new operation there, they all had their own reasons for doing it. Some wanted to prove themselves, while others just wanted to make a fresh start. Whatever their personal reasons were for going, they all still had the same mission, which was to free the human slaves from the Faranox dimension, explore new dimensions and to make friends wherever they could.

When they made their first journey into one of the previously unexplored dimensions however, they encountered a very hostile race that they later come to call fangtails. Unfortunately, when they find themselves greatly outnumbered and forced to run for their lives, Jenny loses her amulet, which later ends up in the hands of the fangtail queen. When she accidentally opens a portal and ends up in the human dimension, it takes the entire team along with the help of one of her own kind to track her down.

Eager to prove themselves after the fiasco with the fangtails, Beth, Sheryl, Martin and Dylan all head out to find a Faranox village so they can free the human slaves and bring them back home. It was supposed to be a standard operation where they went into the village, killed the tribal leader and all of their Agaronin and then took the amulets and the slaves and headed back home. What they found when they got there however was something entirely different than anything they’d ever expected. They found themselves in what was called a free village, where slavery was outlawed and the humans who’d escaped from the slaver villages and made their way there were taken in, cared for and protected. Now, with the help of their tribal leader Thayelle, a plan is set into motion to eliminate slavery entirely from the five surrounding villages, so Thayelle and her people can live in peace and the human slaves can be brought back home.

 

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Ghost Worlds (Book #8)

Four different Earths in four different dimensions left as nothing but lifeless balls of rock and sand after their moons were destroyed, sending massive chunks of debris slamming into the planets, ripping away their atmospheres and extinguishing every last bit of life. With a near infinite number of dimensions, was it beyond the realm of possibility that these four ghost worlds were nothing more than a coincidence, or was it perhaps a coordinated attack intended to destroy whatever, or whoever inhabited those worlds?

Suspicions and theories abound, but they’ll never find the answers without investigating, and for that they’ll require some new gear, including space suits, metal detectors and ground penetrating radar. If these dead worlds truly were inhabited by the race they called the creators, then they not only need to find that out for sure, but they also need to find out who destroyed them, and why.

Also, in an effort to repair a relationship that had grown distant, Jarrod, Derek, Tina and Sarah invite Patricia to come down to the cabin with them for a little vacation so they can reconnect and get things back to the way they were back in the early days. While they’re there, they head out to explore an as of yet unexplored dimension and find a world that’s beyond even their wildest imaginations, as well as a mineral that could either be the key to producing limitless energy, or the catalyst of their own destruction.

 

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Resurrection (Book #9)

When Logan’s body was removed from its grave, they thought it was just the work some a cult, or a deranged individual. Never in a million years would they have dreamed that Derek’s brother had been taken for a very specific reason, nor could they have possibly guessed what that reason might be.

They’d gained their immortality and all of their vast mental and physical abilities from the serum they were given, but what if it could be used for more than that? What if it could be used to regenerate the dead and then bring them back to life with their memories fully in tact? That’s what Freddie wondered, and based on the education that he and Diana had received in the field of genetics from Charles and Richard, Freddie came up with a theory that allowed them to do just that.

What would you do if suddenly your loved ones could be brought back to life with the same immortality and abilities that you have? It was a possibility that was something they never could have conceived of, and yet all of a sudden it was all too real.

With new abilities, new characters and new secrets revealed, Resurrection marks another great leap forward in the development of the Unseen Things universe.

 

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Encounters (Book #10)

The Nathalis destroyed the moons in seven different dimensions in an effort to to wipe out the Zethichtalarin threat, and while it did succeed in killing off the majority of their race, it was inevitable that some would escape to other dimensions before their worlds were destroyed.

It was assumed that the survivors would no longer be a threat, but when Beth and Erin encounter one of their military officers in the Paradise dimension, that assumption is quickly proven wrong.

Now that the Zethichtalarin have begun to show themselves again, what lengths will they go to in order to rebuild their empire? The answer may be found in the Faranox dimension, where a tribal leader from one of the free villages has formed an army with advanced tactical knowledge that no Faranox tribal leader would normally possess.

As the evidence mounts that the Zethichtalarin were behind the formation of that army, the group in Washington forms a team whose job is to search the Faranox dimension for those responsible, and put an end to their plans for a resurgence once and for all.

 

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Resurgence (Book #11)

The Zethichtalarin were nearly wiped out by the Nathalis, but thousands had managed to escape the destruction and wound up scattered throughout many different dimensions.  They chose the Faranox dimension in which to regroup, because not only were the people there somewhat primitive, but the slaver villages had a ready supply of slaves that they could manipulate the free army into capturing and handing over to them.  Their goal was to use the slaves to build themselves a new city where they could gather together the survivors of their race and plan their next move.  They wanted revenge against those who had destroyed their worlds, but they didn’t count on facing a far different and vastly more powerful enemy that was out there searching for them, and whose only goal was to put and end to their evil once and for all.

 

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Emissary (Book #12)

How exciting would your life be if you were assigned to guard mineral deposits on an uninhabited world?  Alarwyn thought that was going to be the sum total of her life, at least for the foreseeable future, but one day everything suddenly changed.  Selected by her superiors to be their emissary to the human dimension thanks to her friendship with Beth and Erin, she finally had a way out, but she never imagined what a life altering experience her new assignment would be.

Also, when Giles, Savaric, Billy and Sarah saved the inhabitants of dimension 3997C from an alien invasion, they had no idea of the repercussions they’d face in the aftermath.  When a colonel that’s had a past relationship with Charles and Richard suddenly shows up at the house, he informs them that the alien invaders known as species 2773 Delta want their heads, and they’re not the type to take no for an answer.

With new characters, new loves and even more laughs as Patricia takes the others on yet another side job in which they revisit the infamous raccoon lady, Emissary is another fun and entertaining journey through the Unseen Things universe.

 

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Companions (Book #13)

Since Alarwyn had been an orphan and Stephanie never had any real family to speak of, from the moment they met they latched on to each other, developing a sisterly bond that made them almost inseparable.

In an effort to get out there and prove themselves to the others, they head off to the reptilian dimension to do a little exploring, but things take a serious turn when they discover a Zethichtalarin plot to destroy the Nathalis homeworld. Together they have to figure out a way to stop the plot, recover the zero point bombs and kill the Zeths who were planning the attack before it’s too late.

Also, when Derek and Jarrod decide to make an “old school” run to the prehistoric dimension along with Tina, Sarah and Patricia just to add a little excitement to their lives, what starts out as a boring trip soon turns far more exciting and potentially deadly than they’d bargained for.

 

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Conspiracy (Book #14)

The hybrids are aging rapidly and time is running out. In his desperation to save their lives, the colonel turns to Derek and Jarrod for help. Their plan to get the hybrids off the base however hits a snag when an administrator named Wilcox starts throwing some nasty accusations at the colonel, forcing them to take drastic steps in order to save not only lives of the hybrids, but the colonel’s life as well.

Also, when Tina, Sarah and Jarrod kidnap Heather from the house in Scotland so they can take her out on a little adventure to a random dimension, they thought they were going to end up someplace exotic or run into yet another strange species that they’d get to document and study. Unfortunately, the random dimension they chose didn’t provide them with any of that. Instead, they find themselves in some very familiar surroundings, and run into some people they’re more than intimately acquainted with.

And finally, when Commander Arthwal’s investigation into the mystery surrounding the deaths of Alarwyn’s parents leads to a revelation that could rock the very foundations of the Nathalis political system, he has to choose between following the status quo and doing what’s right in order to give Alarwyn the justice she deserves.

 

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Infestation (Book #15)

When someone steals the Zethichtalarin portal generator from a secure Nathalis storage facility, Karth and Commander Arthwal put their best men on the case.  Neither of them could have imagined however that the portal generator would be used in a plot that would lead to an invasion that would span across all four of the Nathalis’ dimensions.  An invasion that would force the humans, blue fins and all the others to put boots on the ground, standing side by side with their Nathalis friends to fend off an infestation that threatens to destroy everything.

Back in the human dimension, when Derek, Jarrod and Logan pry Charles and Richard out of the lab to go on a little trip to the planet Gilese 667C c, they end up finding a crashed ship and a dead bridge crew from a parallel dimension that leads them to uncover a tale of revenge against a massive and corrupt corporation.

And finally, now that Logan and Darla’s relationship has gotten serious, he makes the decision to bring her in on everything.  However, Tina, Sarah, Stephanie and Alarwyn have a little test for her before he does so, just to make sure she’s suitable to join the team.  Also, when Logan asks Derek to see if he can find her father that had disappeared years earlier and was presumed to be dead, what he finds in his search leads to yet another mystery that begs to be solved.

 

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Transition (Book #16)

Their patience is at an end. It’s been a long time coming, but they’ve finally had enough of dealing with the stupidity and corruption of the human race, and now it’s time for them to go.

In the year 2112, the military is forced to remove the government from power due to its deep rooted corruption. Unfortunately, about half of the country supports those who were in power, which brings about riots, looting and martial law.

Feeling completely disconnected from humanity, they’re left with two options. Wipe out most of the Earth’s population so that the human race can start over and rebuild itself from the ashes, or leave. Left with no other choice, the group finally decides to make their long planned move to the Nathalis dimension.

 

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Travelers (Book #17)

It was the year 2231 when they started coming through the portals.  The Echnid soldiers devastated the Earth and eliminated nearly eighty percent of the population as they searched for resources they could steal and send back to their home dimension.

Jake and Lana managed to survive the initial assault and went out on the road together in a stolen (errr…salvaged) vehicle.  After what became known as the Day of Death however, where all of the Echnids on the planet suddenly turned inside out, they looted whatever Echnid weapons they could find and then traveled from town to town, doing less than reputable jobs and stealing or salvaging whatever they could in order to survive.

When they happen upon a no name town in what used to be the state of Utah however, they finally find themselves in a place where they can lay down some roots.  The question is, between the Echnid raiders, the roving gangs of humans known as Skinks, and one very angry pregnant girl from the next town over who’s hell bent on making Jake her husband, how deep will their roots be allowed to grow?

 

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Repercussions (Book #18)

Actions have consequences.  You may have done something in the past, or perhaps even on this very day that could alter the course of a whole civilization, or simply change the fate of one individual.  The gang soon discovers this as they start checking in on some people and places from their past to find out how things have ended up for them over the course of the past two and a half centuries.

Plus, when Beth organizes a whole new round of exploration, Giles and Savaric find themselves on a sunless world in a dimension filled with energy forms that appear to be the ghosts of intelligent species from a variety of different dimensions.  When they bring in Charles and Richard to help them investigate it however, one of the energy forms tries to get at them so aggressively that Richard decides to capture it and bring it back to the lab in order to see if they can use the energy to restore the entity to its original form.  Unfortunately, what they end up bringing back is none other than an old enemy that none of them had ever expected to see again.

 

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Reapers (Book #19)

When the reaper drones showed up at the party to kill Diedre so they could reclaim her energy and take it back to Purgatory, she and Logan had go on the run, hopping from dimension to dimension in an effort to try to stay one step ahead of them while the folks back home work on a way to rectify the situation without leaving all of the energy forms on Purgatory stranded there for all eternity.  In their search for answers however, they make some discoveries that explain a lot of things, including why Diedre was so psychotic in her previous life.

Also, when Derek pays himself a visit from the future, he learns that their attempts at finding a solution to the Diedre situation appeared to have worked at first, but things ended really bad for them shortly thereafter.  Now they have to think outside the box to come up with a new and unique way of solving the problem that they wouldn’t have otherwise considered if they’re to have any chance at all of altering the timeline, so the people they care about don’t end up dead.

 

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Invasion (Book #20) (Coming in 2016)

Boredom is a horrible thing to suffer through when you’re immortal, but it seems to be the normal state of things whenever there’s down time between one crisis and the next.

In order to alleviate their boredom one afternoon, the others ask Jake and Lana to tell them the story of how they met, and what happened to them between the time when the Echnids first invaded the Earth, and when the pair finally settled down in the town of Cottonwood, Utah.

Also, the secret that Jarrod and the others have been keeping about their ability to alter reality becomes a bit more public when Sarah uses it to help Jake undo the single biggest regret of his life.

 

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Genesis (Book #21)

When you have the literal power of gods, the ultimate accomplishment would be to use that power to create a living world out of a lifeless hunk of rock.  This was the idea behind the Genesis project.  There’s just one catch.  They need to find a lifeless hunk of rock to use for the project before they can set their plans in motion.  When a stranger named Gerald shows up in the village however, the source of their god-like powers soon becomes all too clear.

Not trusting this amiable stranger in the slightest, Jarrod opens a time portal and travels far into the future.  When he returns a few seconds later however, he refuses to tell anyone where he went, or when for that matter.  Their concern for him grows even deeper when he starts suffering from debilitating headaches that only seem to get worse as time goes on.

Also, during the search for a suitable planet to use for the Genesis project, not one, but two old enemies are discovered and must be dealt with.

Sadly, all great things must come to an end.  Genesis is the final book of the Unseen Things series, and a fitting send off for the characters we’ve all grown to know and love.

 

Origins Trivia

Several things in Origins were vague references to things from my real life. There may be more minor references to things, but these are the major ones.

The adult bookstore Jarrod mentions when he’s talking to Tina and Sarah in the park for the first time. He says if you’re underage, but walk into the place like you belong there, they won’t card you or anything. That was based on a real adult bookstore in the town next to where I grew up.

The spooky old abandoned house where Jarrod and Sarah make love for the first time is actually based on a real house I went to with some friends one time in the middle of the night. My buddy and I went in there with three girls to use a Ouija board and have a generally spooky time. The part about the birds was real as well. I don’t know where they all came from, but the sky was black with them and they’d swirl around in perfect synchronization with one another, like the flowing tide. It’s still to this day one of the most incredible things I’ve seen.

The part about how Derek’s brother committed suicide was loosely based on a real person I went to school with who committed suicide in a similar way. He was in the grade ahead of us, so I was in the 7th grade and he was in the 8th grade when he killed himself.

As for the characters Tina and Sarah, it’s funny, because for almost the whole of book 1 and a large part of book 2…well, you know how when you read a character in a book, you get a mental image of them?  It’s the same when you’re writing them.  I kept picturing  Sarah as Emma Stone with red hair.  Now here’s the funny part about that.  I was picturing Tina as Emma Stone with blonde hair, because I have a picture of her from one of the Spider Man promos where she looks just like I’d imagine Tina looking like.  Now (as of this writing) I’m well into writing book 2, and my image of Sarah has evolved into something different, but for me, Tina is always going to be that blonde Emma Stone.

Another little bit of trivia is a little something about the writing process. I find that my writing flows out of me much more smoothly if I have music playing in the background. For about the first 20% or so of Origins, I was listening to a lot of Diana Krall, but then I discovered Kelly Sweet’s 2007 album, We Are One, and I was hooked. I had it looping over and over throughout the last 80% of the book, and well as through the entire editing and proofing process.

Now that I’m working on book 2, The Hunt, I still have it looping constantly in the background. I even play along with it on bass and guitar when I’m not writing. I’m just absolutely in love with the album!

Now for the last bit of trivia. I don’t really plan out much of my writing. I may have thoughts about events that I want to have happen now and then, but for the most part, I just start typing and let the writing go wherever it feels right.

I had several ideas during the writing of Origins that didn’t make it into the book at all, or that changed completely once I got to whatever parts they were supposed to go into, because that’s just not where the writing was going. Invariably, where the writing took me ended up being far better than the ideas that got pushed along the wayside.

Here’s a good example. At one point I had thought about having one of the Faranox living in our dimension, because he didn’t agree with the taking of humans and as such, he was ostracized by his people and sent to live here. I was also going to have a permanent dimensional portal that was hidden in a cave somewhere. Neither of those things ended up in the book. Instead, I made it so the Faranox can’t exist in our dimension for long without dying because of the different gas mixture in our atmosphere (more about that in the 2nd book) and rather than a permanent portal, they get a portal generating crystal amulet that the Agaronin use to pop into our dimension when they kidnap people.

There were a variety of things with the main and side characters as well that changed, and there were also numerous things that I added as I went along.

All in all, the end result was something I was really happy with. I love the story, and I love writing these characters.

 

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The Hunt Trivia

When I started writing The Hunt, I knew what I wanted it to be in the most general of terms.  They were going to go to the Faranox dimension to rescue Jarrod’s family.  The journey they were going to take to get there and the personal revelations of the characters and their continued character development were all simply a product of typing.  No, I don’t mean character types, I mean actual typing, as in pressing keys on the keyboard.  What you get with the characters in both books is organic development.  I write them in the way that feels the most natural to me in their present situation, and I treat them like real life individuals.

That goes for the story as well.  Very few aspects of the story were pre-planned.  The one thing I can honestly remember pre-planning was the scene with the mounted Agaronin that was running down Derek and Jarrod.  The “punchline” of that scene if you will was pre-planned, but the rest was really just a matter of sticking them into that situation and seeing what happened.  Their dialog was also generated completely on the fly based on their situation, their personalities and their relationship with one another.

The final assault near the end of the book was something that I pre-planned as well, though I didn’t actually come up with it until just before I reached that point in the story, so I’m not sure how honest it would be to call that part pre-planned.  As with the other scene I mentioned above, even though I knew generally what was going to be happening, it developed organically as I wrote it, and turned into something that I was actually pretty proud of.

There are things in this book that are planned for by the characters that never come to pass.  Just as in real life, sometimes you buy things you think you’ll need, and then end up using something different entirely.  Sometimes you make plans, and then find that you have to change those plans depending on the current situation.  That makes the story feel like it’s real and fluid.  Nothing irritates me more than when I’m reading a book and the entire thing feels planned from start to finish.  That just doesn’t feel like reality to me.

There’s a particular scene in this book that gets me all teared up every time.  I got teared up when I wrote it, and I teared up again when I was doing the proofreading.  It’s a scene where Derek and Jarrod are talking why they’re waiting for the girls to come back from their amulet run, and there are some serious new revelations, especially with regard to Derek, that come out during that conversation.  I can’t help it.  I tear up pretty easily at stuff like that.  I always have.  I don’t want to reveal it here, but it’s a pretty heart wrenching scene.  There’s a part toward the end that kinda gets me as well.

The scene with the dead Agaronin in Patricia’s kitchen was very over the top, and was largely inspired by my love of various films, including the Evil Dead series.  There’s even a nod to Army of Darkness when Tina refers to the Agaronin as “primitive screw heads”.

I take you to the blue fin dimension several times in this book, and we get to meet the blue fin people.  They’ll be making a re-appearance in Unseen Things: Exploration.  I also introduced the two other races which are as of yet unnamed, although they were referring to one of them as leprechauns since that’s generally what they looked like.  There’s a very small mention of their dimensions as well.  Inventing new dimensions and new races is probably the most exciting and fun part about this series.  Each one presents it’s own problems and potential dangers, and it creates a vast canvas into which I can paint the characters from book to book.  I’m going to be devoting a fair amount of time to the blue fins in book three.

I had Kelly Sweet’s We Are One album playing throughout the entire writing process, just as I’d done with the first book.  I’m so used to it now, that as soon as I hear it, it completely shifts me into writing mode.

As with Origins, I’m extremely happy with how this book came out and how the story and the characters developed.  This book is a completely different animal from the first one, because I wanted it to be.  The first book was an introduction to literally everything, and that’s exactly what it was intended to be.  It was a book that had to happen for me to be able to write this one, and I’m incredibly proud of both.

 

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Exploration Trivia

When I finished up the main storyline in The Hunt when they rescued Jarrod’s family, I wasn’t really sure where I was going to take the series from there.  My plan was to take a little break to let the next idea just come to me naturally, but after just a couple of days, I couldn’t stand not writing anymore, so I just sat down and started typing.  All I knew was, I wanted to put a lot more focus on their relationship with the blue fin people, but outside of that, I really didn’t know what I was going to do.

The opening scene of the book that involves the confrontation with Diedre almost didn’t happen.  Before I started writing the book, I was actually debating whether to turn that whole thing into a full on scene or to just leave it as something that they made reference to as something that had happened between the previous book and this one.  Ultimately I decided I not only wanted to do the full scene, but I wanted it to be the opening scene of the book since the reference to them wanting to do it occurred at the end of book 2.  It just seemed like a natural place to pick up again, so I ran with it, and it quickly turned into one of my favorite scenes.

Something else that almost didn’t happen was the blue fin village.  My original idea was to have the blue fins living in undersea cities, but considering the fact that the Faranox had captured them as slaves, it didn’t make sense to do that, so it ended up being an idea that was quickly discarded.

Several of the biggest revelations in the book about the blue fins, the amulets and Derek’s mother were all ideas that just flowed out of me as I typed.  None of it was pre-planned.  In fact, very little in any of the books in the series has ever been pre-planned outside of having a vague idea of things I wanted to do here and there, and even then nothing was ever set in stone.  I just typed and it became whatever it was going to be.

Some people may be a bit shocked by the development in the relationships between Jarrod, Derek, Tina and Sarah, but to me it felt like a natural extension of what they already felt for one another.  If it hadn’t have felt so natural, or if it had felt forced in any way, I wouldn’t have included it in the story.

I actually considered killing off Derek’s mother in this book, but I figured it would be too cruel considering his brother had already committed suicide.

There are scenes in every book that actually make me cry every time I read them.  Mostly because I’m a big sap when it comes to sentimental stuff.  In this book, one of the ones that was getting me every time was the scene where Derek sees his mother in the hospital.  Another was when Sarah was in bed, staring at the photo of the four of them in their gear outside the cabin.  I always feel stupid when I cry about stuff like that, but I can’t help it.  I also make myself actually laugh out loud every time I read some of the scenes as well, like the meal scene in the blue fin village.

The revelation about the amulets will lead to something down the road, but I haven’t written it yet, so I couldn’t even guess at what it’ll be.  I guess I’ll find that out when I get to it.

The developments regarding the blue fin people in this book were conjured up on the fly, and it all really started with Freddie playing video games with the guys.  Something as simple as that actually led me to some incredible new revelations about their entire race, which has added immeasurably to the series and has led to the development of a story idea for the fourth book.  Many of the major developments in the series have spawned from seemingly minor, innocuous events.

Once again, I had Kelly Sweet’s We Are One album playing in the background throughout the writing of this entire book.  As soon as I turn it on, I just go into writing mode.  It’s become habit now I guess.

While there was a bit of a nod to The Evil Dead movies in The Hunt during the kitchen scene in chapter 5, I actually make reference to two films in this book – Conan the Destroyer and Tremors.

 

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Revenge Trivia

Revenge was actually written in two weeks.  I started it on December 31, 2013 and completed the story on January 13, 2014.

I’ve included small nods to various movies in the different books.  In this one, there’s a small nod to the television show Sanford and Son when I mention that Patricia looks like she’s about to have the big one.

The developments that happen with the blue fin people in this book weren’t planned.  I came up with them on the fly as I was writing, simply because one thing led to another and they led in a logical direction toward what’s coming in the future books.  It also makes them far more interesting as a race and a way larger part of the overall story than if I’d have just left them as a simple, island dwelling people.

Even though this book explores the leprechaun and insect dimensions a bit, I purposely haven’t gotten too involved with those people or those dimensions as of yet, and I haven’t decided if I’m going to.  One option is to leave them behind as they start exploring new dimensions, while the other option is to leave them as a more major story element for Jeremy, Mike, Jenny and Laurie to explore.

There’s a huge development coming in the next book that came to me while I was thinking about the Jan Brewster character and about how the beginning of the next book, Unseen Things: Immortals, was going to play out.

Barbara’s unexpected kinks came to me as I was writing as well.  I wanted to have a funny scene involving her, Billy and Freddie, and that one scene added a whole new dimension to her character.

Very little of any of the books have been pre-planned.  I usually just start writing and let the story go wherever my fingers take it.  The part in this book with the confrontation between Tina and her mother had been semi-planned for a while now.  I knew it was going to happen eventually, but I didn’t know when.  I also didn’t plan how it was all going to play out ahead of time, and to be honest, I actually had a hard time figuring out how that scene was going to conclude.  Without giving anything away here, they ended up in a pretty tight spot that could have landed them in some legal trouble and I had to figure out a way to get them out of it.

 

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Immortals Trivia

This book had several references in it to various films and books.  Some are rather overt while others are more subtle.  See if you can pick out the references to They Live, Star Trek (The Trouble With Tribbles episode), The Evil Dead 2, The Waterboy, South Park and Twilight.  There are also mentions in passing of some notable characters, like when Tina calls Sarah Nancy Drew.

The whole thing with the Steve the insect man was intended to be a funny bit, but then it quickly turned into a running joke.

The reptilian booze was something that was completely random.  While I was writing that section, I was unsure exactly what I wanted to do with them in that dimension.  Ultimately I decided to make the dimension rather boring, so I threw in the part about the reptilian booze to make up for the boredom of the dimension, because that particular detail led to some very amusing scenes later on.

I came up with the whole leprechaun, amulet thing on the fly.  I was trying to figure out how to make the leprechaun dimension more interesting, so I figured I’d give Jenny and Laurie something to find outside of the village.  It added a new aspect to the story while at the same time creating an interesting mystery for them.  It also gave them a really awesome way to wrap up their first mission.

The Ach’len race are based on the whole Nordic alien story.  There’s reportedly a race of aliens called the Nordics that look similar in appearance to the Ach’len, so I used them for inspiration.  If you’ve never heard of Nordic aliens, look it up.  It’s pretty interesting.

What happened to Jarrod’s arms was one of the few things I really pre-planned.  I wanted to have a scene that showed off their new regenerative abilities, so I figured what better way to do that?

For the scenes in Scotland, I spent some time with Google Street View looking around Killearn and the surrounding area so I’d have a rough idea of where I wanted the events of that part of the story to take place.

Making Dylan McKenzie drunk when the girls first meet him was something I came up with just as I was writing that scene.  It was a random thought that led to some very funny moments and also his reasons for being drunk and not wanting to keep the records anymore.  There have been a lot of random little thoughts and details like that throughout the series that have led to far bigger and more involved things.

 

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Division Trivia

This book had more references in it to various characters and films than any other.  See if you can pick out the references to Twilight, Remo Williams: The Adventure Begins, Revenge of the Nerds, Highlander, They Live, Hell Comes to Frogtown, Sealab 2021, Strange Brew, Rodney Dangerfield and David Beckham.

Billy referring to getting fitted for tuxes as a long, slow death was a little inside joke I threw in.  One of the Kelly Sweet songs I have on loop while I write is her cover of Phil Collins’ In the Air Tonight.  She can’t stand the original song and refers to it as feeling like a long, slow death.

At some point, Sarah calls Jarrod “Muffin”, which is a pet name I call my wife frequently.

Tina says, “What’s up buttercup?”  This one will take a little explaining.  Our border collie Buddy has trigger words that make him go nuts.  There’s a whole list of words and phrases that make him freak out, and that’s one of them.  It’s really hilarious.  He’s such a quirky, awesome dog.  The funny part is that if we stop saying whatever trigger words we’re saying, he looks at us and smiles, waiting for us to say more so he can keep freaking out.

Like many things in the series, there are a variety of elements that become major things in the story that I just came up with on the fly as I was writing.  Their developing the ability to link and bringing back Martin Decker are just two examples, but a major example of this is when I decided to have Jarrod and Derek work on a secret project that eventually led to them marrying Tina and Sarah.  I had no intention of having them get married when I started the book.  As I was writing however, it just felt like it was time, so that’s what I had them do.

 

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Trackers Trivia

This is the longest book in the series.  The entire book comes in at over 105 thousand words.

There are only a couple of references to things in this one.  See if you can spot a quote from Cheech & Chong, and another reference to a joke that Sam Kinison once used in his act.

I named the character Heather after Connor MacLeod Heather from the movie Highlander.

While they’ve all been of varying lengths, all of the books in the series so far have had sixteen chapters.  I find that if I set an average goal of around 5,500 words per chapter, the books end up being the proper length for the stories.

I hadn’t originally intended to bring Beth forward as a leader, but as I wrote the story, it suddenly occurred to me how awesome it would be to take the one person who was the least likely to become a leader and turn them into one.  I absolutely love what Beth has become, and I had a seriously great time writing her.

The part about possibly having to kill Heather if she didn’t work out was something that just popped into my head.  It was a good way of showing the change in Beth and her willingness to do whatever it took to protect the team and what they were doing.  The whole theme of the job being more important than the life of any one individual sprang from that initial thought.  In a way she’s like Carol from The Walking Dead.  She’s wiling to do anything it takes to protect the team and the work, even if it means killing someone.  Fortunately, she didn’t have to.

The part about Jarrod’s eyes changing was something I hadn’t really considered the first time I wrote that he was able to see through Steve’s eyes while they were linked.  It was actually an idea I came up with while I was writing this book, and I think it turned out rather well.  The changes in their eyes will come into play in the next book, Ghost Worlds.

 

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Ghost Worlds Trivia

Ghost Worlds is the first book in the series to really become a fantasy / sci-fi hybrid.  The only time they’d dealt with an advanced civilization in previous books was when they visited the Ach’len dimension, but that wasn’t a major part of the storyline.

There are two references in this book, one to a film and one to another book series.  When Billy says, “Well honk my hooter!” that’s a reference to a line from the film Better Off Dead.  As for the book reference, at one point Beth is talking to Thayelle and offers to take her dimension hopping.  This is a reference to the Myth Series of books by Robert Asprin and Jody Lynn Nye.  That series involves multiple dimensions and dimension travel as well, and they refer to it as dimension hopping.  They even have a device that allows them to travel from one dimension to another called a d-hopper.

I had originally planned to kill off a character in this book that had appeared in previous books, but as the writing of this book progressed and I actually remembered that I’d wanted to do that, I was too far into the book to include it any sort of a natural feeling, organic way, so I’ll be adding it to the next book instead.

I rarely plan the events of my books ahead of time.  As such, things like breaking up the human trafficking ring, the dimension of Paradise with the super tame and fearless animals, the mineral they found there that was the key element used to create zero point energy and a variety of other events were all completely written on the fly.  I did pre-plan a few things for this book, as I often do, but I didn’t plan very much.

This book, as with all the others, continues with the 16 chapter format.  I find that 16 chapters with a certain average word count brings me exactly to the length I want my books to be.

 

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Resurrection Trivia

I skimped a bit in the references to different things that I threw into the last book.  This one has several.

Derek tells Logan, “Wish in one hand, shit in the other and see which gets full faster.”  This is something my father used to tell me when I was a kid, and not only did I find it funny, but it’s also a very good way of telling someone that nothing’s going to happen unless you make it happen.

When Tina is demonstrating her new mental abilities on Derek and Beth, she casually and randomly changes their colors a few times.  This was nod to the movie Kung Pow: Enter the Fist.

The part where Derek hugs his mom and he’s so big and muscular that he can’t quite close his arms around her.  That’s something I’ve had a problem with many times, especially when I was heavily into weight lifting.

When Heather tries out remote sensing, and in fact the entire method that goes into them using their new mental abilities, that comes directly from a method I was taught by a psychic many years ago.

There’s a reference to The Undertaker and his patented choke slam move when Erin choke slams a purse snatcher in Italy.

Tina makes a reference to Meatloaf and his song, I Would Do Anything for Love (But I Won’t Do That).

The part about being able to project disguises over themselves is a little nod to Robert Asprin’s Myth Series.

The whole thing with relation to Thayelle and Jonathan near the end of the book was simply an impulse on my part.  I came up with it while I was writing the conversation between her and Beth, and it just felt right, so I ran with it and turned it into something that became a major part of the end of this book, and will play a major part in the beginning of the next one as well.

As far as the new mental abilities are concerned, I hadn’t originally intended to take it as far as I did, but what I did end up doing added a hell of a lot of fun to the story.  The more I developed those abilities, the more fun it became, so I just ran with it.

The hobbies I gave to Giles and Savaric were things I came up with on the fly, and I’m really happy with how it turned out.  It gave the characters some unique and distinct qualities that were indicative of their personalities.

This book was almost the first book to have more than sixteen chapters, but I decided in the end that it would be better to stop where I did so I could pick things up right where they left off in the next book.

 

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Encounters Trivia

There’s a part where Savaric is drunk in the control room and they hear him burp loudly over the intercom, followed by Diana shouting at him, “Sav!!!  That’s rude!!!”  This is a direct reference to something I personally did in the second grade.  We were all sitting around the reading table, and while one of the other kids was reading, I had the guy next to me lean over so I could whisper something in his ear, only instead of whispering, I ripped out a big ol’ chunky belch.  The teacher was all, “Duane!!!  That’s rude!!!”

When they’re trying to decide on who the strippers will be at the party, Derek insists he’s not going to do it again because he looks like a wounded moose when he dances.  That’s something I’ve personally said many times, because that’s exactly how I look when I try to do anything but slow dance.

Explaining how the blue fins built the building on their island, as well as their process for making glass was a lot more of a pain to write than I originally thought it would be, mainly because I had to come up with reasonable ideas for how they made both the building materials and the glass they created.

I actually disgusted myself a little in describing Thayelle’s transformation, because I could see it all in my head as I was writing it, and I was like, “Ick!”

I came up with a different job for the parents of Mike, Jeremy, Jenny, Laurie and Heather because I didn’t want their team to be doing the same things the others were.  My plans for them are that they’ll be mentioned from time to time as to what they’re working on, and once in a great while I may have Heather’s parents in it for a bit, but as of now I have no plans to turn any of them into fully active characters.

The new mental trick that Tina came up with was something that just popped into my head as I was writing the scene, and as with so many other things that just popped into my head as I was writing, it turned into a major thing that’ll see a lot of use down the road.

I purposely limited how much I included Alarwyn and the other Nathalis in this book, because I want the relationship between them and the humans to develop slowly.

The stories Giles and Savaric tell the others about their time in the Zethichtalarin labs is something I’ve had rolling around in my head for quite a while, but there was never an appropriate moment to include it until now.

Likewise, the entire part with Sarah’s mother Deborah in this book is something I actually planned on doing two books ago, but there was never an appropriate place to fit it in until now.

 

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Resurgence Trivia

The new telekinetic abilities the characters develop in this book is a bit of a nod to the movie Zapped!

When a robber comes into the restaurant, Martin called him “My weasly little friend.”  This is a reference to a line in the film Detroit Rock City.

When Sheryl holds her chest and starts staggering around saying, “I’m comin’ ta join ya Elizabeth!  This is the big one!” it’s a reference to the 70s sitcom, Sanford and Son.

When Heather’s drunk and talking to them on the phone, she says (talking about her brother), “He’s just a boy.  Poor little feller.”  This is a reference to a line in an episode of South Park, which in itself was a reference to a line in the movie Sling Blade.

When Jarrod is irritating Sarah and he says, “It was totally worth it,” that’s a reference to a line from animated series, Sealab 2021.

In chapter 13 there’s another vague reference to the Twilight books and films that’s sort of a running joke in the series.

When it came time to do the spell checking in this book, the scene where the girls drunk called the guys had so many slurred words and odd spellings that it caused the whole spell checking process to take considerably longer than usual.

 

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Emissary Trivia

This book is the longest in the series, coming in at just over 120K words.  It also took the longest to write and edit due to some personal issues.

I had originally intended the book to focus more on Alarwyn, but that isn’t the way it ended up because of the addition of another new character named Stephanie.  As Alarwyn and Stephanie become fast friends and practically sisters in this book, the next book will have quite a bit of content with the two of them getting their feet wet by heading out on some explorations runs together.

There’s an Are You Being Served? reference when Beth is talking about ways they can steer girls in Giles’ direction at the club.

There’s a quote used by Derek: “With great power comes great responsibility.”  Many people mistake the source of this quote.  It’s actually a quote from Voltaire in 19th century France.

There’s a Gordon Ramsay reference with regard to Giles’ cooking.

When they go to see the raccoon lady, Diana projects herself as the old woman from the movie Drag Me To Hell.

The colonel makes a small reference to stepping into the Twilight Zone.

Stephanie makes reference to the first Highlander movie and then goes on to talk about how all the sequels sucked.

The colonel makes reference to the aliens in The Simpsons in the last chapter.

Some of the information and references to the aliens known commonly as the grays are based on real accounts from abductees.

I hadn’t originally planned on bringing in a new main character as Giles’ love interest.  However, as I wrote their conversation in the club, the personality that came out of her made me absolutely fall in love with the character.  Plus, adding her into the mix allowed me to connect her and Alarwyn together as best friends since they were dating Giles and Savaric.

Bringing in someone from Area 51 is something I’ve been planning on doing since the last book, though I didn’t know what form their involvement would take.  Even as I was writing it, I still wasn’t sure.  That’s what’s fun about organic writing.  You just sort of let the story write itself as you go along.  In this case, the colonel turned into a relatively major, recurring character, which wasn’t my first thought at all.  I originally planned for it to be a one time encounter, or maybe just a character that would show up once in a great while, but that all changed as I wrote his initial scene.

The part with Tina’s biological mother Helen getting sober is something I’ve had planned for a while, but it needed to be done at the right time, and this book was that time.  As of now I have no plans on bringing Helen back into the story.  This, at least for now, was just sort of closing the chapter on that whole thing, while at the same time making Tina and Barbara even closer than they were already.  It also gave me a chance to bring up Sarah’s sadness over the fact that she’d never know the love of a real mother.

 

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Companions Trivia

Demond, the guy who took the promotion from Stephanie right before Giles met her is named after Demond Wilson who played Lamont on Sanford and Son.  Why?  No particular reason.  I just like that show and the name popped into my head while I was trying to think of a name for him.

Stephanie is surprised when Alarwyn cracks a joke, so Alarwyn says something about not being allowed to have a sense of humor just because she has pointed ears.  This is an obvious Star Trek reference.

Jarrod calls the prehistoric dimension Jurassic Park, though it doesn’t retain that name in the book.  That particular dimension is simply referred to as the prehistoric dimension.

While the girls are out on their mission, Giles tells Savaric that he can’t keep walking around like a miserable old boot.  This is a reference to a line from an episode of Are You Being Served? in which Mr. Grainger had been walking around the store for days in an extremely bad mood.

There’s a reference to a surstromming challenge video on YouTube.  The video I was referring to is here, and I highly suggest subscribing to Jeff’s channel as he does wonderful review videos on a variety of things.  He also has some very entertaining story time videos where he relates different amusing stories from his past.

When they go into the distillery on the reptilian dimension so that Giles and Savaric can see how the reptilian booze is made, Savaric says that some things really are better left unseen.  This is a vague reference to the name of the series.

After Derek’s unpleasant shopping trip with the girls, Jarrod has a talk with him, and at the end of it he gives Jarrod a Chris Reeve large Sebenza knife.   This is a real knife made by Chris Reeve Knives right here in Boise, Idaho.  Maybe someday if the series really takes off I’ll actually make enough money to buy one for myself.

At some point Stephanie and Giles are talking, and she says, “Cross my heart and hope to die.”  He asks, “Do you?” and she says, “Not at the moment.”  This is a direct quote from the movie Better Off Dead.

There’s a small reference to the face huggers from Alien movies when they’re talking about how Darla latched onto Derek at the club.

There’s two Ghostbusters references in the haunted house part.  The first is when Patricia says she forgot to bring along her unlicensed nuclear accelerator, and the other is when she mentions later that they’re not the Ghostbusters and that she doesn’t have a trap hanging off of her belt that they can use to toss under the ghostly creature they found.

Tina says, “If we had a nickel for every time we beat up some ass hole who deserved it, we’d have a shitload of nickels.”  This is a reference to a quote from the movie Baseketball.

When Jarrod tells Derek what scares him.  He says, “The thought of living an average, boring life and then dying someday without having done anything at all of any real value.”  That’s a direct reference to how I feel about my own life, which is a big part of why I’m so passionate about writing this series.

 

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Conspiracy Trivia

The first book of the Unseen Things series, Origins, was published on November 23, 2013.  Conspiracy, the fourteenth book of the series was published on November 22, 2014, one day before the one year anniversary of the publication of the first book.  That means that I’ve published fourteen books in one year, with a combined total word count of 1,437,533 words.  That’s not counting the bonus scene and the deleted scene that are posted here on the website.  That’s just the count for the books themselves.

When they find the parallel dimension and discover that Martin is homeless there, they do a remote viewing on him and find out that he’s in Spokane at the House of Charity – Catholic Charities homeless shelter.  This is a real place in Spokane, Washington.

Tina asks, “What’d you do?  Twiddle his knobs or something?  He went out of focus.” – Loose reference to a quote from a very drunk Mrs. Slocombe on Are You Being Served?.

There are numerous references to Burt Reynolds, Loni Anderson and the film Stroker Ace.  I also threw in a reference to the Cannonball Run movies.

When Jeff, Steve and the colonel go to the prehistoric dimension on an exploration run, there are several references to the television show Land of the Lost.  There’s also a reference to the film Quest for Fire in this scene.

There’s a Captain Kirk reference made by Derek after Jeff has an unexpected sexual encounter in the prehistoric dimension.

When Tina’s upset about Alarwyn’s situation and the guys are talking to her and Sarah about a side job that Patricia told them about, Tina gets irritated and says, “Fuck him and everyone who looks like him!”  This is a loose reference to a George Carlin quote.

When Steve and the colonel disappear for several days and then eventually return, Patricia asks them where the hell they’ve been.  The colonel says he left them a note on one of the wall panels and Patricia gets upset because she never thinks to check those.  This was a reference to something similar happening to her in an earlier book in the series where she didn’t think to check the wall panel.

 

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Infestation Trivia

This book was originally planned to be the penultimate book of the series, but those plans changed as I was writing it.  There was no way I could wrap things up with the main part of the series within this particular book.

I always have music playing while I’m writing, and I have some standard artists that I listen to.  During this book I was listening to Queen, Kelly Sweet, Teagan and Sara, Echosmith and Aur Revoir Simone.  From chapters thirteen through sixteen however, I had one song playing on loop throughout, simply because it fit the mood of what I was writing.  Those chapters are the lead up to the big battle, the battle itself and then the aftermath.  The song I was listening to was Robert Tepper’s There’s No Easy Way Out from the Rocky IV soundtrack.

Charles mentions that perhaps it hasn’t been the wisest of decisions to grow their numbers the way they have, but also notes that in a way it’s been highly beneficial to them.  This was a reference to how I felt as the author about bringing in so many characters.  They’re needed in their own capacities, but having so many has become a bit difficult and burdensome at times.

While I was editing this book, I discovered a plot hole that would have made the last four chapters of the book completely unnecessary.  I had to rack my brains trying to figure out a way to make it all work, and grew ever more frustrated as everything I came up with had the exact same issue.  Fortunately, I finally came up with a solution that only required a small bit of editing and made everything work out perfectly.  Phew!

Gilese 667C c, which plays a rather large part in this book, is an actual planet thought to be habitable. (Yes, that small “c” on the end is supposed to be there.  It’s part of the name.)

The part with the crashed ship on Gilese 667C c was simply a thought I came up with as I was writing the scene, and that one little event ended up turning into a major part of the storyline.  Many of the more major story elements in the series either came from a random thought or a small event that ended up turning into or related to something much larger later on.

The part where Richard explains to Jarrod why using crystals to amplify the power of a zero point bomb wouldn’t result in a significantly larger explosion by showing him what happens when you plug a resistor into standard AC power is something we used to do back in electronics class in high school.  We’d plug the resistor into the socket, turn on the power and it’d either burn up or pop like a firecracker.

The use of the adrenaline needle to revive Raina after they restored her body was a reference to Pulp Fiction.  Later, there was a direct reference to it as well.

 

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Transition Trivia

Tina complains that there’s nothing to watch on television because there’s so much crap and filler.  This is a common complaint in my own household.  It’s like, why are we paying for so much stuff we have no desire whatsoever to watch?

When Tina tells Naelen that all the freaky stuff is kept hidden from people in the human dimension, he notes that none of them seem overly freaked out by any of it, to which she replies, ‘That’s because we’re the ones who knock.”  This is an obvious reference to the show Breaking Bad.

Derek asks Jarrod in the bathroom at Gencore if he’s got any big, mean dookies on deck.  This is a reference to the Bad Lip Reading video, Everybody Poops.  Look it up on YouTube.  It’s pretty funny.

In chapter 12, Jarrod calls Derek bro and Derek questions him about it, because that’s not the way it usually works.  Derek calls him “bro” and Jarrod calls him “man”.   This was a little acknowledgment of the fact that I’ve always had them refer to each other in this way, and when it was suddenly reversed, it threw Derek off a little.

Chapter 13 jumps to June 12, 2112.  I chose this year because it was about in the right date range for where I needed to take the story, and it’s also a nod to Rush’s 2112 album.

In the riot scene in chapter 13, Tina says, “Let me do the talkin’.  I speak their lingo.”  This was a reference to the Cheech & Chong sketch, Ralph and Herbie where Ralph (Cheech) says that when he spots a French poodle named Fifi.

Tina uses one of the rioters like a ventriloquist’s doll.  This was a nod to a similar scene in the film Killer Klowns from Outer Space, when one of the alien clowns uses the town sheriff in the same way.

 

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Travelers Trivia

This book (book 17) was written before book book 16 because it was supposed to be the first book of a companion series that takes place in the same universe called the Wasteland Earth series.  As I wrote it however, I decided that it would make a much more fitting end to the main series, so I scrapped the idea for the companion series all together and used it as book 17 instead.  Plans to have it end the series changed as well, because while I was writing book 16, I came up with ideas for three more books.

In my head, Jake’s character is sort of like a slutty version of Bruce Campbell.

The reason I wanted to write this book was so that I could work with an entirely new group of characters who had to face everything without godlike powers.  They’re just normal folks who survived the Echnid attacks and are struggling to rebuild everything so they can get their lives back to some semblance of normalcy in a world that’s gone through a drastic and devastating change.  It gave me a chance to write new characters in a world that was unfamiliar, facing an enemy that was completely new, and other enemies of the human variety (the Skinks), that were somewhat based on the baddies in the Mad Max films.

 

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Repercussions Trivia

In chapter three Jake tells a story about the homeless shelter he stayed at, and in the story there’s an old guy named Eddie who lives there.  This character was loosely based off of a real person, though he wasn’t really homeless.  When I was seventeen years old, my first job was working at a gas station, and living behind the gas station in an old trailer was this guy named Eddie who used to come over to talk to whoever was working there at the time.  He was old and had been smoking all his life, so his voice sounded like five miles of bad road, but he was a nice old guy.  Anyway, I happened to think of him when I was writing that character, so that’s why I named him Eddie.  Sadly, the last I heard of the real Eddie was that he passed away a very long time ago.

 

In chapter six, the following comment is made:

Derek: “That’s the problem with immortals that breed. There gets to be too many of ’em after a while.”

Patricia: “Kinda the same for those that don’t breed as well.”

This was a reference to the large number of characters I’ve brought in throughout the run of the series.  I’m sure you’ve noticed by this point that I have members of the “family” that don’t even have names and are rarely ever even mentioned.  That’s because they do their own thing outside of the context of the main story.  Mike, Jeremy, Jenny and Laurie’s parents are a good example of this, as is Thayelle’s father.

In chapter 9, Jarrod says: “Hell yeah, I’m totally in!  Just let me know when and I’ll be there with balls on.” – I’ll be there with balls on is a quote from Cheech & Chong’s Next Movie, when Cheech is talking to Donna on the phone.

There are two references to the Adam Sandler film, The Waterboy.  The first is in chapter 12, and the second is in chapter 14.  This is one of my all time favorite films.  In fact, I’ve seen it so many times that I can pretty much quote the entire movie verbatim at this point.

In chapter 16, Stephanie says, “Buck up little trooper.”  This is a quote from Better Off Dead, when Lane is nervous about having to ski the K12, and his friend Charles says that to reassure him.

I wanted to write this book in such a way that it could be the final book in the series, if that’s what it ended up being.  As such, I wanted to revisit a lot of things from their past, so we could see what happened as a result of their influence on various people and events.  A part of this book however opened up a story line that can be continued in a subsequent book, so there will be at least one more book in the series after this one.

Bringing back Diedre was something I’ve sort of had in the back of my mind for a while now, but I hadn’t really anticipated the direction it would take until I actually wrote it.  As it turns out, it all ended up being way different than I had imagined.

I realized right before I was ready to publish that I forgot to write Steve into the party scene at the end of the book, so I remedied that by including him in the after party group discussion where they ask him if he had a good time, and it’s at that point that he tells them how things went for him.

I really wanted to write more of the Jake and Lana characters, because they’re just insanely fun to write.  Jake in particular has quickly become my favorite character in the series, because he’s not only hilarious, but he manages to be completely shallow, reckless, irresponsible and cocky, while at the same time he’s also deeply honorable, loving and sincere.  His past regrets weigh heavily on him, but he doesn’t let that stop him from living his life and loving the people around him.  He internalizes those regrets, and every so often then when he talks about those regrets and the stories behind them, you get a glimpse of just how deeply he’s been hurt by them.  I’ve considered writing a whole book about his and Lana’s experiences from right before the met, all the way up to the point where they reach that town in Utah they ended up at in Travelers, so that may still be in the pipeline somewhere before I end the series.

 

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Reapers Trivia

In chapter 3, Jake says “What a rush, huh?” after Jarrod tells Slappy that he’ll be reverting back in age.  This was a little quote from Chong in Cheech & Chong’s Up In Smoke.  He said it after Cheech ate a whole handful of acid.

In chapter 4, Jarrod asks why the guys messed with that building on Purgatory and then and then had to go on the run afterward.  He says, “We need ’em here right now, not out there dimension hopping.” Dimension hopping is a reference to The Myth Series, by Robert Asprin.  That’s what they call traveling dimensions in that series.  They even have a device called a D-hopper.

In chapter 8, Jarrod asks Charles if he’s sure that Freddie’s not gonna train the guys from the parallel dimension wrong as a joke or somethin’.  This was a reference to the movie Kung Pow, when Master Tang says that they trained Wimp Lo wrong, as a joke.

In chapter 9, a colossal drunken roar emanated from the house.  This was a reference to the Black Adder II episode where they had a drinking competition on the same night when Edmund’s puritanical aunt and uncle, Lord and Lady Whiteadder came over for dinner.  They hear something, so Lady Whiteadder asks what it was.  Edmund says he didn’t hear anything, and then he asks Lord Percy if he heard anything.  Percy responds, “No.  Apart from that colossal drunken roar.”

In chapter 10, Charles is drunk and suddenly he wakes up, gets to his feet and asks, “What place is this???” before he passes out on the couch again.  He says it again after Richard puts him to bed later.  This is a reference from the classic film The Comedy of Terrors.  Basil Rathbone’s character suffered from catalepsy, so every time they thought he was dead, he’d eventually wake up and say, “What place is this?”  It’s one of my all time favorite films.

Entangling the two Purgatory dimensions was something I came up with on the fly while writing that particular discussion.  It worked well to not only explain what happened to the sun in that dimension, but it also explained the corruption of the energy forms, and I was able to link the cause of it back to a malfunctioning portal generator on a random alien ship.

Derek visiting himself from two years in the future was also something I came up with on the fly.  I wasn’t really sure what I was going to put there when I started writing that scene, but having Derek coming back to warn himself about future events worked out perfectly.  Originally I was planning on having it be a bear that would have attacked the girls if Derek hadn’t have stopped it, but that would have just led to a whole lot of nothing later on.

Jarrod figuring out how to alter reality is something I’ve been planning for the characters for a very long time now.  I knew they’d eventually reach that point, and even though it’s not explained in this book, I generally know why they can do it and how it works.  I’m not sure if I’ll ever actually explain it in the books though.  I’ll just have to see how things progress.

My original plan for Diedre was to have her regain her memories, after which she would turn psychotic and try to kill them all.  I decided against this, because I thought having her find redemption and forgiveness was a far nicer and more interesting way for her character to develop.

This book is the first time Jarrod has really gone off on Derek and bitched him out for his attitude and the way he treats everyone when he’s upset over what’s happening with Logan and Diedre.  The only other time I ever did this was when I had Sarah bitch out Tina over her attitude in one of the earlier books, but even that pales in comparison to the bitching out he gets from Jarrod in this one.

Bringing Peter into the story 19 books into the series was something I wanted to do simply so we could hear his story.  What I wasn’t planning was just how horrible his story actually was.  That all just came out as I wrote it, but I think it works really well in establishing not only why he’s so close to Charles, Richard, Giles and Savaric, but also why he’s been such a recluse for so many years.

 

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Invasion Trivia

As ridiculous as some of the names are, all of the towns mentioned in this book are real places.

I suffer from primary acute insomnia, and I went through a severe episode of it for about two and a half months during the writing of this book.  As such, I only had maybe a few hours a day where I had enough focus to actually get any writing done, which is why it took over four and a half months to get this book written.

Something else that delayed me in my work on this book is that I was editing a cookbook for a neighbor as a favor to her.

In chapter 2 when Danny says to Mike and Jeremy, “Yeah well, I’m over it.  Sniff you jerks later.”  This is a quote from Captain Murphy on Sealab 2021.

In chapter 3, Chapter 3, Jarrod quotes the movie Remo Williams: The Adventure Begins, where the character Chiun said, “Assassination is the highest form of public service.”

In chapter 5, Tina says, “But that would actually require us to do somethin’.  We’re already too busy doin’ nothin’.”  is a reference to a quote from the movie Trinity is Still My Name.

In chapter 8, Jake talks about his lack of life skills because his parents loved him so much that they did everything for him.  This is the same thing that happened to me with my own parents.  To this day I’m still not very good at being a self sufficient adult because of it.

In chapter 9, Jake has a giggle loop welling up inside of him.  The giggle loop is a reference to an episode of the British comedy, Coupling.

 

In chapter 10 –

“Ugh…thanks for reminding me.  I swear, a week ago if you’d have told me that aliens were gonna show up and destroy the world, and that I’d be stealin’ some rich guy’s car and goin’ on the run with some guy I sprung from jail, drivin’ from one shit town to another, killin’ people for food and blankets, and fixin’ cars for a bunch of inbred rednecks with extra digits and wonkey eyes…  I mean, if you’d have told me all that literally just a week ago, I’d have dragged your ass to the nearest rehab facility and had ’em lock you away.”

“Heh.  I wouldn’t blame you a bit.  It does sound pretty ridiculous when you throw it all into one long sentence like that.  Oh hey, there it is there I think,” he said as he pointed to the left side of the road up ahead.

Jake was goofing on the fact that what Lana said all came out in one really long sentence.  I love self aware humor, and the fact is that I reread that sentence over and over again like ten times and I couldn’t really think of another way to word it, or figure out a way to break it up in a way where it would still convey the same feeling.  As such, I figured I’d just goof on it instead.

In chapter 11 Jake asks Max if he’s got somethin’ gnawin’ on his conscience.  This is a quote from My Name is Trinity.

In chapter 16 –

“Well what is it then?  Fires, floods, earthquakes…double A batteries…,” Richard asked with all the dryness of one of Savaric’s finer comments.

“Double A batteries?  What the fuck man,” Jarrod asked with a laugh.

“I dunno.  It just popped into my head.  So seriously now, what did you want to tell me?”

Double A Batteries is a reference to a line in Kids in the Hall: Brain Candy where the evil CEO of the pharmaceutical company is offering Dr. Cooper a bunch of random stuff.

 

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Genesis Trivia

In chapter 2 Sarah puts her arm around Freddie and says, “Now chin up little buckeroo.”  This is based off a line in Better Off Dead when Lane’s friend Charles is trying to encourage him to face the K12 ski slope.

In chapter 2 after Sarah transforms into an energy being and then back again, Gerald said, “What a rush, huh?” This is a quote from Cheech & Chong’s Up in Smoke movie.

In chapter 4 after Jake links with Snots, Jake says, “He likes me!  He really likes me!” This is referencing that famous quote from Sally Fields.

In chapter 6 at the temple, Giles says, “This way.  Follow me.”  This is from the movie Cheech & Chong Still Smokin’.  Chong said it in a silly Dutch accent, so every time I see this phrase I always think of it exactly the way he said it in the movie.

In chapter 6, Savaric says, “Uh huh.  Ok.”  This is Captain Murphy quote from the animated series Sealab 2021.

In chapter 9 when they’re calling Logan a little bitch in the locker room, this is based on a bit from the movie Baseketball where Coop and Reamer keep calling Squeak a little bitch.

In chapter 10 Derek says, “It ain’t that kinda party.”  This is a quote from the movie Fear of a Black Hat.

In chapter 16, Derek says, “All right, all right!  Jeez…always bossin’ me around.”  The always bossin’ me around part is a reference to a line in the movie Strange Brew.

This is the 22nd full length novel I’ve published in less than three years.  The first book of the series was published on November 23, 2013, so this one was published 24 days before that, on October 31, 2016.

I realized during the writing of this book that I’d written the Zethichtalarin race in a way that makes them seem very similar to Nazis.  They’re very science oriented, they see other races as inferior, take slaves from other species, and they’re very militaristic and disciplined.  To be honest, it hadn’t really occurred to me until now just how much like Nazis they really are.  It’s sort of an interesting revelation.

I wasn’t sure this was going to be the final book in the series until I actually started writing it.  I hate to say goodbye to the characters, but the series has finally run its course.  I’ve had the idea for this story playing around in my head for quite some time now.  It wasn’t originally intended to be the series ending story, but I think it worked really well in that regard, and I’m incredibly happy with how the ending turned out.  I see it as a fitting end for both the series and the characters, and while it makes me sad to move on to different stories, in my heart, these characters are always going to be a part of my family.